story mein buhut si galtian hai, or buhut jaghon pe sequence ki kami hai. magar koshish achi hai. himmat mat haren or likhty rahen. practice makes perfect
story achi hy per end ki samaj nai aai lagta hy writer thak gay thay likhty likhty.and second thing thora unkop aik chain main aur pichlay waakiat k sath match ker k likhna chaye.thanks
story mein buhut si galtian hai, or buhut jaghon pe sequence ki kami hai. magar koshish achi hai. himmat mat haren or likhty rahen. practice makes perfect
story achi hy per end ki samaj nai aai lagta hy writer thak gay thay likhty likhty.and second thing thora unkop aik chain main aur pichlay waakiat k sath match ker k likhna chaye.thanks