hifsa i think u are new writer…this is great novel..plot bi acha hai but i think apko apney expression pe focus kerna chaiye…yani story aur dialogues ku present kerne ka tareeqa…no doubt this is good novel and i enjoyed it…i am just trying to highlight some issues that i saw in ur novel and i hope it will.help u to improve ur writing skills:)
nice story . i like it. abb ke dusre novel bhi bhaut achi hai
Thank you… JAZA KALLAH
کہانی پڑھ کر مزہ آ یا۔ بہت اچھی کاوش تھی اللہ آپ کو مزید کامیابیوں سے نوازے۔
Stay blessed and keep shining…
Thank you… JAZA KALLAH … AAMEEN SUMMA AAMEEN
Bohut hee aala . Maza agaya .
Thank you… Be happy
hifsa i think u are new writer…this is great novel..plot bi acha hai but i think apko apney expression pe focus kerna chaiye…yani story aur dialogues ku present kerne ka tareeqa…no doubt this is good novel and i enjoyed it…i am just trying to highlight some issues that i saw in ur novel and i hope it will.help u to improve ur writing skills:)
Yesss… And thank you so much… JAZA KALLAH
best story pr ye novel bss itna hi tha ya iska second episode ayega ya koi part plzzz tell me ???
Nahi… Bus Ye itna hi hay… Hosla afzai ka Shukriya… Khush rahain
Hifsa plz mujy is novel ka link send kr dy
Ye nove).yahi pe khtm hua hai….