Story bahut achi thi…momaina ka character bahut acha tha. ..aur jb ek ladki job pe aapni majbooriu ki taraf se ghar se bhar jati pr society us se support krne ki bajae kitana pareshan krti hai…ye point bhi bilkul correct tha…jaise momaina ko aapni izzat k liye jaga jaga se bhag na pada …
Pr climax ma story ko bahut jaldi nipta diya aapne…umar aur momaina ki bhi thodi story honi chahiye thi…jaise achanak se ek hi waqt ma ek engagement ka tut na aur dusari ho bhi jana…ye point thoda low..tha…
Story bahut achi thi…momaina ka character bahut acha tha. ..aur jb ek ladki job pe aapni majbooriu ki taraf se ghar se bhar jati pr society us se support krne ki bajae kitana pareshan krti hai…ye point bhi bilkul correct tha…jaise momaina ko aapni izzat k liye jaga jaga se bhag na pada …
Pr climax ma story ko bahut jaldi nipta diya aapne…umar aur momaina ki bhi thodi story honi chahiye thi…jaise achanak se ek hi waqt ma ek engagement ka tut na aur dusari ho bhi jana…ye point thoda low..tha…
Khair likhti zaroor raha kare…humaji