Bhut khobsurat khani bhut khobsorat tarekey se beyaan ki gai hai. Mai is writer ko pehli baar parh rhy hn per ye novel parh k bhut maza aya. Ek saada se kahani bhut interesting way mai batai gai hai. Rabail aur muqaddas ka character mera favoirite hai. Is novel mai ye baat bhut ache se batai gai hai k jo log sir Allah pe bharosa karte hai aur porey yaqeen k sath dua krte hai tu Allah unka sath kbhi nai chorta. Unko hr mushkil wakht se nikal deta hai. Chahe pehle usne kitni bhi gunah kia hn pr such dil se tauba Allah zaror qabool krta hai aur unhe dunya k sath sath akhirat ki naimoto se bhi nawazta hai. Aesa hy ek kirdar rabail ka bhi thi jo is kahani ka hero hai. Us dunya ka kaunsa bura kaam nai kia pr jb wkht aya tu use sb pata chal gaya k ye dunya fani hai. Agey jo kahani behaan ki gai hai wo bhut hy khobsurat hai. Jo log ye kh rhe hai k ye novel peer e kamil jesa hai tu ye baat bilkul sahy nai hai. Zarori nahi k hr wo kahanai jis mai lrka pehle bigra hua hta hai aur baat mai sudahr jae tu wo peer e kamil jesi hy hogi. Is mai writer ka andaz bhut mukhtalif hai aur khas tor pe kirdaar duno k bhut mukhtalif hai.
Theme acchi hy novel k ..kafi had tak peer e kamil se inspiration hy…repetition of dialogue bohat hy.
Bohat se cheezon ko ek sath mila kr mesala banany ki koshish ki gye hy…
Sb se bari khami use of english with incorrect spelling hy…
aur bohat he ajeeb lagta hy jb matric pass larka apny village se city me aa kr galat english bolta hy….hr character village k logon se english me baat krta hy.village k larky ko “gandum” bolna bhe nai aata .
Kafi awkward se baat hy.
Try to cover your mistakes nxt time.
good novel har novel acha hotan ha
Mahnoor ka end kya hua ye tou mention hi ni kiya gya iss wja se novel incomplete hai wrna bht acha hai
raabail ka style boht unique he. i think novel hero ki personality ki wajah se ziada acha he.
Bhut khobsurat khani bhut khobsorat tarekey se beyaan ki gai hai. Mai is writer ko pehli baar parh rhy hn per ye novel parh k bhut maza aya. Ek saada se kahani bhut interesting way mai batai gai hai. Rabail aur muqaddas ka character mera favoirite hai. Is novel mai ye baat bhut ache se batai gai hai k jo log sir Allah pe bharosa karte hai aur porey yaqeen k sath dua krte hai tu Allah unka sath kbhi nai chorta. Unko hr mushkil wakht se nikal deta hai. Chahe pehle usne kitni bhi gunah kia hn pr such dil se tauba Allah zaror qabool krta hai aur unhe dunya k sath sath akhirat ki naimoto se bhi nawazta hai. Aesa hy ek kirdar rabail ka bhi thi jo is kahani ka hero hai. Us dunya ka kaunsa bura kaam nai kia pr jb wkht aya tu use sb pata chal gaya k ye dunya fani hai. Agey jo kahani behaan ki gai hai wo bhut hy khobsurat hai. Jo log ye kh rhe hai k ye novel peer e kamil jesa hai tu ye baat bilkul sahy nai hai. Zarori nahi k hr wo kahanai jis mai lrka pehle bigra hua hta hai aur baat mai sudahr jae tu wo peer e kamil jesi hy hogi. Is mai writer ka andaz bhut mukhtalif hai aur khas tor pe kirdaar duno k bhut mukhtalif hai.
Bs writer se guzarish k novel ko thora edit kr de jis ki waja se ye novel ek behtreen novel ban skta hai
Theme acchi hy novel k ..kafi had tak peer e kamil se inspiration hy…repetition of dialogue bohat hy.
Bohat se cheezon ko ek sath mila kr mesala banany ki koshish ki gye hy…
Sb se bari khami use of english with incorrect spelling hy…
aur bohat he ajeeb lagta hy jb matric pass larka apny village se city me aa kr galat english bolta hy….hr character village k logon se english me baat krta hy.village k larky ko “gandum” bolna bhe nai aata .
Kafi awkward se baat hy.
Try to cover your mistakes nxt time.
Thanks For Your Opinion. and is novel ki new Edition bohat Jalad aa rahi hai. jis pe sub Recover kia gaya hai