Good story…main khamosh reader hon matlab buht he kam comment karti hon …zaroori nahi k mohabt mil jahy tu he jeet hasal hoti hy..as story maim mohabat ny apny wajood ko manwaya hy..ya b zaroori nahe k hr story k end sarf khushi par ho zindagi main dukh b hoty hain…zindagi nam he khuse or gham ka hy…dono cheezain zindagi main paye jaty hain….end b acha hy ap ki as noval ka… Keep it up
yeh nvl main ne pehle bhi parha tha
mere khiyal se digest mein b aya hwa hai
bohat acha tha, achi kahani hai aur ache se likha bhi howa hai
aaj kal muhabbat mein yehi hota hai
kisi ko koi piyar nahi milta
sb mtlbi hote hai
achi kahani hai
Good story…main khamosh reader hon matlab buht he kam comment karti hon …zaroori nahi k mohabt mil jahy tu he jeet hasal hoti hy..as story maim mohabat ny apny wajood ko manwaya hy..ya b zaroori nahe k hr story k end sarf khushi par ho zindagi main dukh b hoty hain…zindagi nam he khuse or gham ka hy…dono cheezain zindagi main paye jaty hain….end b acha hy ap ki as noval ka… Keep it up
nice
ap ka 1st novel parhaa…. kuch khas maza ni aya… half read kr k b kuch story samj ni ayee…. best of luck for nxt tme…
nice one.either it is published in any digest?
achi kahani hai.
yeh nvl main ne pehle bhi parha tha
mere khiyal se digest mein b aya hwa hai
bohat acha tha, achi kahani hai aur ache se likha bhi howa hai
aaj kal muhabbat mein yehi hota hai
kisi ko koi piyar nahi milta
sb mtlbi hote hai
achi kahani hai