Khak e Taqdeer

Kahani acchi h magar jaisa ki amal ka chakkar pura hua vo bhi h magar allah bda raheemo kareem bhi h isme itna dukh pda or ladki ko toba karte dikhaya hi nahi gaya agar sidq dil se toba kar leti to kahani or acchi ho jati or ladke ko bhi sza mil jani chaiye thi baherhaal sza or jza dene vali sirf allah ki zaat h kahani me aap ko thoda or likhna chaiye the qki tishnagi si rah gai.

Ap acha likhti hn ?
Acha topic hy .. But the story made me sad ?